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Fake-fans, other readers and lurkers,

Thank you for your patience and your kind words of support. I'm feeling better now, and I'm writing again. I have so much to tell you, like my sexy new shoes, my scary battle with a giant, aggressive spider in the middle of the night, and the time that seagulls pooed on me in my work clothes just as I was arriving at work! (Why couldn't it happen just as I was leaving?) But all that will have to wait for a quieter moment because I am having an insanely busy week. Last week was like this, too. It's mostly work, but there's been social stuff happening also.

The Universe has given me a gift, in that one of my dearest friends is coming to Canada for a visit from Japan. I haven't seen her for years and years, and I have missed her every day since she left Canada. She's not coming because I was feeling down. She didn't even know. This is just a lovely coincidence. I feel blessed and lucky!

Anyway, fans of Justice will be happy to know that Chapter 26 will be coming back from the betas any day now. However, I don't think I can post it this weekend because I'm going away for the weekend (Yes, there will be pizza and red wine) and I think I'm going to be too busy for the next four days. Saturday is usually laundry day, but if I want to be able to pack some decent underwear for my trip, I'd best do laundry tomorrow or Friday night. Also, I had to work late last night and it's probably going to happen again on Thursday or Friday. I don't see my schedule permitting me enough time to fix all the mistakes in my chapter.

I can post it early next week, maybe Monday or Tuesday. Sooner if I can manage it. Now I have to get my butt to the gym to burn off my vitamin-laden chocolate bar (It was this one http://www.purdys.com/Crisps-Chocolate-Bar-Milk-Chocolate-3-Bars-P337.aspx ) and read something on my addictive new Kindle.

PS Chapter 26 has a lemon in it! I hope you'll come back and read it.

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(Anonymous)
Welcome back :-)

It's always great to see friends from far away, I hope you guys have a wonderful time!

I took the plunge and read all of Justice this weekend, your writing just keeps improving as time goes on! I'm really gunning for Mike, I can feels all sorts of levels of genuine frustration over how things are going! I really Bikky is gonna be safe now.

I also really like Norm, I find him quite charming, and much more respectful than the various others who have gone after Ryo in the past. I'm hoping he and Ryo can continue to be friends (basically I'm hoping you don't write him out! ha! I've developed quite a soft spot for that guy).

Doritos bag was inspired.

Also, JJ's shirt in one of the earlier chapters, "Gay guys suck... if you ask nicely"... if I was an artist I would be compelled to draw JJ in his clubbing gear, wearing that shirt with the eyeliner and everything.

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Looking forward to the next chapter, glad you're getting your groove back. xx

Loz x

Loz! You read all of Justice in one weekend? I am so flattered that you would choose to spend your time that way. Thank you for doing that.

I'm not going to get rid of Norm. I think he's charming, too. His kind of charming is very different from Dee's kind of charming. Norm is more ordinary, more vulnerable.

My fave chapter of Justice is still Chapter 6. I don't think many people saw the Doritos bag coming. Also, I liked the action in that chapter. It had momentum.

Even if you're not an artist, I think it's great that you see JJ in his clubbing gear so clearly in your mind. What position is he standing in? I see him with his legs apart-- one straight down and the other splayed out to the side, with his thumbs in his belt and a sullen/sultry expression on his face. Man, Drake would eat him up...

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I got, literally, NOTHING done all weekend thanks to you, but it was worth every damn second! Do it again in a heartbeat.

I was asked at work today what I did the last couple of days and inside my head was a mantra of "don't say reading gay porn, don't say reading gay porn, don't say reading gay porn..."

Chapters 16a and 16b are probably my favourites that you've written so far. Followed by the section of Dee reflecting on things afterwards.

Dee's entrance gave me the very real feeling of a hurricane sweeping in to completely decimate everything in its path, I think I actually went "ho shit" before starting 16b, and that part is written so well, because you can see where Dee is coming from and you can also see where Ryo is coming from and neither of them is technically in the wrong. They're both just trying to deal with the situation. (Mental image of Norm sending Dee 'sorry for hitting on your boyfriend' flowers XD ).

Also loved how you wrote the sex after that, Dee not saying please because he needs to feel that Ryo is still his and that he shouldn't have to ask, like a darker part of his mind claiming that possession, especially since he must have heard at least some of what that conversation was about. It was very primal, needy and possessive. Then afterward, Dee letting slip those few questions that show exactly what the sex was really all about for him. Perfect.

I also think it was a really smart decision not to have Ryo top after that, because when Dee does get around to offering himself up like that it needs to be because he wants to rather than because it was something Norm was willing to do and he's trying to one up him. It would have tainted the whole thing, so major kudos on that decision. As much as I am looking forward to when that does happen, I'm glad it didn't happen as a result of an argument.

The women’s underwear, I love how it's changed hands so many times and Ryo is oblivious. Poor poor Bikky.

Gah, there's so many things I love about it. I'm just hearting all over the place. <3

I can see JJ with a huge grin, leaning on Drake with one arm reached up around Drakes shoulders and a martini in the other hand and Drake looking very very sheepish.


Loz x

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