brit_columbia (brit_columbia) wrote,
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Brit is stuck! Feedback wanted for the lemon I'm in the middle of

Okay, so I'm in the middle of writing a lemon. It's Chapter 22 of Slave to a Gladiator and it's the final chapter of the story. It's really slow going and and it's not flowing, probably because it's my last chapter, and as I mentioned in my last post, I seem to have a problem with loss of momentum when I'm approaching the finish line.

I'm stuck because I can't decide which sex-direction to take this lemon in. Here's the situation: Ryo has Dee chained to the bed. He can do whatever he wants to Dee! They've had one orgasm apiece while in the shower a short time ago (Dee's was only alluded to), and they've each got one left before they run out of steam.

So, dear pervy readers... would you like Ryo to screw Dee again, but slower this time? Would you like Ryo to ride Dee? Blowjobs? Sixty-nine? Rubbing against each other? Hand jobs? I can't run the whole gamut because the chapter would be too long, I've got about two thousand words to play with.

Tripple_p has already said she'd like Ryo to ride Dee, so that's one vote recorded. Let me know which sex act you'd like me to write about, and I'll do the one that gets the most votes. I'm going to start my homework in the meantime.

Thanks for reading!
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